Wrong Turn Part
– 1
Sayantram..office lo work muginchukoni nenu intiki vachi chuste illantha
hadavidiga undi enta idi intha mandi janam unnaru ani anukuntundaga appudu
gurthuku vachindi ma nanna naku pellli sambadalu chustunnaru andulo oka ammai father inka babai lu nannu chudataniki
vastunnarani.
Intloki adugupettagane ma father nannu chusi vacha ra eroju kuda intha
late enti sare kani ila ra ani pilichi...ammai valla father ki nannu parichayam
chesaru...na peru Lavan Kumar, age 28, tellaga untanu, nenu chese work ilaga
mottam telusukoni maku kurradu ok bava garu muhurtalu chusukoni ammai ni
chudataniki ma intiki randi ani cheppi vellipoyaru..ma nanna santhosham
bavagaru ani cheppi vallatho patu inti bayatadaka velli saganampi vacharu.
Lopalaki vachi ma father maa ammatho ila annadu osey arundathi mottaniki mana
intlo chala yella tarvata mana intlo pelli bajalu mogabotunnaye ante avnandi
chustundane na bujji pellidu ki vachadu ante inka aschayaram gane undi. Ala
vallu na pelli tantu gurinchi matladukuntu vunte naku matram vollantha
chematalu pattesay..okkasariga bhoomi antha kampinchinattu anipinchindi ..kallu
chetlu adaka emcheyalo tochaka na room lo ki vellipoye gadiya pettukoni mancham
meda kulabadipoyanu.
Identra
...ee mogavadina pelli anaganee egiri gantu vestadu kani nenu ila tension
padipotunnanu ani anukuntunnnara..daniki oka reason undi adi entate nenu dress
vipesi nunchunto ammai ani porabadataru meru ala untanu nenu......
Ma amma
nannalu ku okka ga nokka abbai ni avatam valla garamba pencharu...ma amma ki
adapilla puttalani korika undedi kani nenu puttam tho tanaku adapilla pudithe
ela ready chestundo na chinnappudu alaga nannu kurchopetti ready chesedi. Ammai
getup lo nannu chusina evarina sare nenu abbai ni ante nammevaru kadu endukante
na rangu alantidi mari piga ma amma naku vaddanna nalugu petti na juttu ki
sambrani vesedi nannu juttu cut
cheyinchataniki oppukunedi kadu ala na sariram chala sunnithanga marindi piga
na juttu kuda twara perugu vundedi.
Ika naku
ooha telisinapptnunchi andari abbai llane nenu kuda jolly ga enjoy chesevadini
ma amma ki istam lekapoina nenu raka raka la haristyles maintain chesevadini
ala na inter varaku bagane jarigipoindi. Aa tarvata degree loki enter ayanu
ikkade naku asalu bayam pattukovatam modalu aindi...degree loki vachaka na
frnds tho tirigatam vallatho chating cheyatam thone saripoyedi ala oka roju
vallaki na tenth, inter photos
chuipstundaga andulo ma amma naku 10th lo fancy dress competition ki vesina
Gopikamma getup photo chusi na frnd okadu ila annadu entra Lavan nuvvu 10th lo
ela unnavo ippudu anthe unnav okka height lo marpu tappa asalu chudataniki
sannaga inka chepplante najjuga unnav ra nv kani lady getup veste na asalu
ninnu evaru gurthupattaleru oka hot figure lane chustaru annadu...vagindi
challe pora ani vallani pampi na room loki velli addam munchu nunchoni nannu
nenu chusukunnanu vadu andi nijame ani pinchi na chinnaptnunchi nenu sannaga ne
unnanu ani anukunnanu. Kani aa tarvata aa vishayame marchipoyanu.
Ala
konni rojula tarvata college lo undaga toilet vachi bathroom loki velte na frnd
already toilet postu nunchunnadu nenu velli vadi pakka dantlo postu unte
aprayatnanga vadi dani meda na kannu padindi. Anthe nenu okkasari ga shock ki
guriyanu endukante vadidi almost nakanna double undi piga lavuga kuda undi.
Identi vadidi antha undi nadenti inthe undi ani cheppi internet lo search
cheste na age valladi antha almost na frnd di lane unnai naku bayam pattukundi
nakendu peragaledu ani..aa roju ni8 intiki vachi bonchesi nidra potunte na frnd
di inka nenu net chusina valla ve na dream loki vachay vatini ala gurtu
techukuntundagane naku out aipondi first time.
Wrong Turn Part – 2
Teliyakundane naku oka inferiortiy complex pattukundi appatnunchi nenu
mogavadine istapadatanu kani enduko teliyadu na frnds di kani inka evaridina
chuste nadi erect avvatam start ayyedi ala nenu daily vatini oohunchuntu na
chest ni press chesukuntu Hand pump kotta dam alavatu chesukunnanu...
Ala
jarigipotu undaga oka roju poddune lechi snanam chesi college ki ready avdamani
cheppi addam mundu towel meda nannu nenu chuskunte na chest ammai laku malle
kasta perigi undtam gamaninchanu emundile kontha mandiki inthe untay ga ani
cheppi college ki vellipoyanu...kani na alavatuni matram manukolekapoyanu...ala
chustundagane na body nake teliyakunda chala marpulu vachay. Ala nannu nenu oka
roju chusukoni shock ki guryanu entante na chest inka cheppalante na breast teenage
adavalla ku malle nikkapoduchukoni perigi poyi unnay alane na nadumu sannaga
unte na pirralu matram ettuga ayyay...ika appatnunchi naku bayam perigipoyi ee
naluguri lo unna kuda full ga body mottam dress lo ne undevadini...na frnds tho
bayataki velli tiragatam kuda tagginchesanu. T – shirts vesukoni tiragaleni
paristitiki vachesanu.
Oka
roju na frnds antha kalisi oka room lo BF's chusta nannu kuda join avvamani
balavantam cheste vellanu. Akkada vallantha dantlo vache ammai lanu chustu
songa karchukuntu aa figures body shape ni boobs ni chudane valla penis sarruni
piki levatam gamaninchanu kani aa figures ni chuste ematram mood raledu but
andulo unde male pornstar di chudangane nadi light ga erect ayindi.
Ala
degree complete kuda ayindi job lo cherina kani na position lo em marpu
raledu...ika labam ledu inthe unte kanuka inkemanna avvachu nenu matram
mogavadi gane undali naku ilanti pichi korikalu povali anukoni doctor ni
kalludam ani decide ayyanu...appudu doctor nannu check chesi em ledule babu
kontha mandi mogavalla lo harmone imbalance valla rommu peragatam nadumu
taggatam lantivi untai operation tho marchochu kakapothe oka chinna vishyam
entante inni rojulu nv hand pump gents danni oohunchikoni cheyatam valla
females meda intrest radu niku okkasariga kabatti nv immediate ga cheyalsina
pani entante velli edanna prostitute tho kalisi enjoy chey ela anipinchindo
naku vachi cheppu and daily nuvvu counceling ki ravali ani cheppadu. Sare
doctor meru cheppinatte chestanu ani cheppi vachesanu.
Idi
ila undagane ma nanna naku marriage fix chese saru ...so idi na paristthi
frnds. Ika late cheste anthe sangathulu ventane edo okati chesi mundu nadanni
test cheyali ani cheppi na frnd okadiki phone chesi telisina prostitute number
unte pampara ani adiganu..vadu oka agent number message chesadu.
Aaa number ki call cheyagane....oka lady voice Hello nenu Kanakam ni
matladutunna avathala evaru andi ventane nenu na peru cheppi oka manchi figure
ni ni8 ki arrange cheyyamannanu daniki Kanakam figures mottam eroju book ayyaru
nenu matram kali gane unnanu nv nenu cheppina chotu ki vachay ani address msg
chesindi...
Evng Kanakam pampina address auto vadiki chupinchi ponivamannanu...Auto
nenu cheralsina Gamyam vypu parugulu pettatam modalu pettindi kani appudu naku
teliyaledu nenu tisukundi WRONG TURN ani...........
Wrong Turn Part – 3
Auto
vadu cheppina address daggara dinchagane chuste adi city bayata oka old bunglaw
la undi andulo chala gadulu vunnay. Nenu chinnaga lopalaki veltunte konni rooms
lo ammai lu make up vesukuntunte inkonni room lo ammai abbai latho unnaru nenu
silent ga tanu cheppina room number daggaraki vellagane bayata iddaru bodyguards
addu paddaru..nenu ventane naku kanakam cheppina Code Word gurtukvachi vallaki
cheppanu vallu pakkaki jarigi nannu lopalaki pamparu.
Lopalaki
enter avvagane mallepula parimalamtho room antha gumainchi kodutundi.
Chudataniki chala visalanga undi dim lightling tho room antha neat ga decorate
chesi undi naku tension ekkuvai melliga madyalo unna mancham vypu adugulu
vesanu inthalo bedroom nunchi Kanakam bayataki vachi natho Oh nuvvena aa phone
party baga letha ga unnave sare undu vastunna ani cheppi loniki velli ready
ayyi vachindi. Kanakam oka middle age
aunty tanu saree kattina tiru jada lo puli petti allina teru chuste ee
mogadikina kasitira katu veyalani untundi kani naku matram ee feeling raledu.
Na
pakkana kurchoni ika enduku alasyam modalu pettu ani cheppi mancham mida
panukoni tana chira inka langa etti ra mida padu kanichey..alasyam cheyamaku
naku chala panulu vunnai andi. Naku chematalu pattesinay emcheyalo telika alane
nilabadi poyanu adi gamaninchi tanu enti first time aa ani adigi ninnu chustene
artham avutundi le first time ani sare kani mood teppistanu undu ani lechi na
shirt vippesi na banian tesi tanu bittara poindi natho identra adavalla la niku
unnay andi nenu bayapadutunte sare le ela unte nakenduku ani cheppi na pant zip
open chesi nadanni bayataki tisi chsui kangu tini natho entra raka raka naku
mood vachi e ni8 veyinchukovali ani anukunte nilanti teda tagiladu ani
kasirindi nenu ventane tanato naku pelli kudirindi nenu test chesukovataniki
vachanu nadi lestunda leda ani cheppi pls naku cooperate cheyandi ani
batimalanu.
Daniki kanakam sare ani oppukoni nadanni tana chetiloki tisukoni adistu
muddu pettindi aina kani nalo chalanam ledu ika labam ledanukoni tanu nadanni
notlo pettukoni chikutu adistu entha prayatnam chesina naku levane ledu...ika
na valla kadura nidanni lepatam vellipo ani cheppabotunte tanaki phone
vachindi.
Avatalaki velli Phone etti matladunte naku koncham koncham vinipistundi
tanu evarino batimi ladutundi vaddu pls eroju figures kali leru ramaku ani kani
avatala vallu oppukunnatu leru ventane call cut aipoindi...Tanu tension ga na
daggaraki vachi kurchoni ila anukundi aa sachinodiki ee roje mood ravala na
figures emo kali leru vadu vaste na dumpa temputadu poni nenu veyinchukundama
ante vadi dampudi ki nenu tattukolenu
ela ra anukuntundaga nenu emindi ani annanu...appudu tanu na vypu chusi edo
alochinchukoni tanalo tane matladukoni navvi ventane natho ila andi nidanni
leputanani mata ichanu kada danni ela lepalo artham aindi ani cheppi bayata
unna body guards ni pilichi chevilo edo cheppindi vallu pada veldam ani natho
annaru nenu ekkadi ante avanni anavsaram pada ani nannu balavanthanga lakku
poyi oka gadilo padesaru.
Na gunde dada peragatam modalu pettindi em jarutundo artham kaledu.
Inthalo gadi talupu tesukoni iddaru hijralu na mundu ku vachhi nanu chusi abbo
entha andam ga unnado ee kaboye pitta aina cha andaru velli ee kanakanike
dorukutaru padu manaki tagalaru business start cheddam ante ani anukuntu vachi dave chelli mustabu ayydu
gani ni mogudu vastunnadu ani annaru.
Ey em matladu tunnaru miru nenu mogadnni nannu pattukoni pitta , chelli
ani antarente ani annanu. Vallu nannu chusi navvi memu modatlo nilane chelli
ikkadi ki mogavallamane anukoni vachamu kani malo vishayam ledani telisi
mammalni ela chesi debbalu veincharu appudu telisinde maku memu ento niku
telustundie lo eroju ni8 ika alasyam cheyakunda ra ani lagaboyaru nenu
vidilinchukoni parigetta boyanu kani nannu pattukoni na shirt ni chinchesindi
andulo oka hijra.
Wrong Turn Part – 4
Ika rendo
di na pant inka drawer lagesi nannu nude ga chesi nilabetti ippudu parigettave
annaru nenu siggutho chatuga nilabadi na battalu naku iccheyandi nenu
vellipotanu ani annanu . Daniki vallu velduvu le chelli eroju ni8 ni shobanam
ayyaka vellipoduvu idigo akkalaki kopam teppinchakunda bayataki vaste paddatiga
ready chestamu ledante niku debbalu padatay ani annaru.
Naku
hijras ante oka idea undi vallu emchestaro naku telusu vallatho godava
pettukovatam manchidi kadu mundu vallu cheppinattu vindam tarvata tappinchukune
sangathi chuddam ani cheppi nenu oka chetto na breasts ni inko chetto na penis
ni cover chesukuntu chinnaga adugulu vesukunti valla daggaraki vellanu.
Vallu
natho ikkadi daka vachaka ee siggente ani cheppi na chetulu lagesi na body ni
chusi shock ayyi jealosy ga feel ayyaru intha andamga undi inka ente ni edupu
ani cheppi oka hijra na nipples ni suck chestunte inkoti na chinna penis ni
dani notlo pettukoni chikutundi inthalo body guards vachi vallani aravagane
..ha sare sare ika pani modalu pedatam ani cheppi nannu bathroom loki
tisukuvelli hair removal cream tho na body antha hair tesisi daggarundi naku
snanam cheppinchi oka mukmul towel tisukoni na body ni tudustunte aa towel
touch kottaga anipinchindi.
Ika
nannu bayataki tisukuvachi oka hijra na chetulaki nail polish apply chestunte
inkokati na hair ni arapedutu abba ente ni juttu intha andamga undi piga
savaram kuda avasaram lentha ga ni neck
kinda daka undi ani cheppi tala arabetti juttu mudi vesindi.
Nannu vadileyandi pls miku dannam pedatanu ani batimalutunna vinakunda
bra and panty ni techi vesaru lo langa vesi transperent white blouse inka
transperent blue color saree na boddu kindaki kattaru naku edupu tannukuntu
vastundi na paristhithi chusi ika aa tarvata na face make up start chesaru
first face mottam cloth tho tudichi neat ga powder rasaru aa tarvata eye brows
shape tisi eye dazzler petti katuka addi bottu petti pedalaki leta erupu rangu
lipstick vesi ika na jada mudi vippi chakkaga duvvi nadumu varaku savaram petti
jadalo malle poolu turimaru.
Ika chusukove ni andanni ani cheppi lepi addam mundu nilabettaru nannu
nenu ala chusukoni shock ayyanu kani enduko telikundane na penis lechi
nilabadindi cheera lo piki ettuga kanipinchesariki vallu navvukoni vediki ila
undatam antene istam akka mana daggara bukaistunnadu ani client daggara adi
leste ibbandi danni neat ga kattey mani andi sare chelli ani cheppi na cheera
etti na panty lagi katteyabotunte vaddandi ani batimalu tu edva boyanu ventane
rendo hijra na jada pattuku lagi osey edchavante ni anthu chusta makeup antha
cherigi potundi gammuna kurcho cheppinattu chesi vellipove ani bedirincharu
vastunna edupu ni digamingukunnanu. Nadanni kattesi na cheera sardi pakkana
kurchopetti manhchanni poolatho alankarinchi mustabu chesaru..
Inthalo bayata nunchi naku arupulu vinipinchay evaro Osey kanakam kotta
pitta vachindannav ede ekkade ani arustunte kanakam gontu vinapadindi vachesava
Kumar bava nikosame chustunna fresh candidate ready ga undi aa gadilo vellu
bava nikosam waiting ani ante sarene ani cheppi gadi loki enter ayyadu 6
adugula ettu undi dittanga simham la unte na paristithi jinka pilla la
ayindi..Kanisam vedikanna cheppukunte nenu abbai ni vadilestademo chudali ani
kangaru kangaru ga duram jariganu inthalo akkada unna hijralu ika ma pani
aipondi veltam ee chelli jagartha all the best ani cheppi veltu talupu daggara nunchunna
aa Kumar gadi bugga gilli letha pilla bava puvvula chesuko ante Osey meru ponde
naku telusu ela chusukovalo ani kasurukuntuu..Na vypu tirigi naduchukuntu
mancham medaku vachi kurchoni ala moola dakkunte em vastunde ra na mundiki ani
arichadu. Naku bayam vesi ventane tana daggaraki vellanu.
Wrong Turn Part – 5
Nenu
velli kumar pakkana kurchogane okate mandu kottina vasana vastundi asalu matalu
kuda sarigga ravatam ledu vadi notlonunchi aa matthu ki. Nenu vaditho matlade lopu na cheera paita
lagesi na male breasts ni vottutu intha chinna ga unnay ente evadi cheyyi
padaledu ni meda intha varaku ponile na boni manchide ika chikatam modalu
pettave ani zip tiyyaboyadu.
Inthalo
nenu kumar tho ayyo nenu cheppedi okka kshanam vinandi nenu mirankuntunnatu
ammai ni kanu abbai ni nannu ela balavatham ga chesi mi daggaraki pamparu
meranna na meda jali chupinchi vadileyandi ani vedukunna kani tagina mattulo
unna vadi cheviki nenu cheppindi emi ekkaledu baga mood tho vaste ente ededo
vagu tav aina ippudu enti nuv mogadi vi antava
aithe sare asalu mogadu ante ela untado mogadi dhi entha vuntundo niku
chupistane ani cheppi nannu nilabetti na chira konganu balavatham ga lagesadu.
Okkasariga ala chese sariki na cheera vadi chetilo undipoyindi gira gira
tirigesariki naku kallu tirignattu anipinchi kasta lo terukoni langa jacket lo
unna na vypuku na cheera nunchi vastuna scent vasana pilustu mundu ku vadu
vastunte nenu bedirpoyi venaki venakki jarugutu godaki anukunnanu ala Kumar na
mundu vachi nilabadi nenu atu itu tappinchukovataniki vilu lekunda chetilu
addam petti vadi oka chetto na rendu
chetulu piki lepi godaki adimi petti inko chetto na nadumu pisikestu na breasts ni nalipestu
chiraviki vadi pedalatho na pedalanu andukunnadu vadi notlo nunchi vastunna
vasanaki tattukoleka vantu vachinattu modata anipinchina kasepatiki vadu na
pedalanu korukutunte chinna ga lona kattesi unna na bujji modda levatam modalu
petti naku ibbandi kaligistunte atu itu oogutunnanu adust cheyataniki kani vilupadaledu.
Kasepatiki vadu na position chusi arthamayyi nilanti vallani entha mandi
ni chudalede chusava okka muddu pettagane ni daniki entha mood vachindo ani
cheppi ni danni ibbandi pettanu le ani cheppi chappuna na langa inka panty lagi
na modda ni free chesadu adi ventane 3 adugula tachu pamu la lechi nilabadindi.
Danni chusi vadu navvi ippudu asalu mogavadi dhi entha untundo
chupistane neku ani cheppi na chetulu alane pattukoni vadi rendo chetto pant
tisesadu anthe danni chudagane na mati poyi na modda inkasta
perigindi...endukante nivurugappina nippula levakundane kumar madda 5 angulala
poduvu inka 3 angulala vedalpu tho undi. Vadu na face lo expression chusi
ascharya poindi challe danni nuvve nidra lepali ani cheppi vadi chetto na
chetini tisuko vachi balavantana pattinchadu. Danni touch cheyagane sarruna
levatam modalu pettindi modata na chetini tiseyalani chusina poorthiga lechina
vadi dani size chusi stroke cheyalani anipinchindi. Ala chinnaga kumar kalla
llo kallupetti na chetto vadi danni stroke cheyatam modalu pettanu dadapu 9
angula la rod la tayaru aindi danni chudagane naku sagam oopiri agipoyindi.
Kumar malli lip kiss modalu pedithe oka chetto nenu stroke chestune
vunna unde koddi vedi ekkatam modalu pettindi vadi modda naku arthamipoindi
mood vachesindi vediki ika pani aiponde ani anukunna. Ala godaki anukoni unna
nannu akkade mokkalla pi kurchopetti ika chetto adinchindi chalu ika notiki
pani cheppave ani tosadu kani danni tisukovatam na valla kaledu kanisam dani
tip ni kuda chikaleka poyanu. Osey lanja ila cheste unna mood potunde sarigga
chiku ante nenu prayatininchana na valla kaledu ika vadu labam ledu ani nannu
lepi mancham daggaraku tisukuvelli vadu mancham meda kurchoni ippudu try chey
annadu nenu edo trans lo unnattu vadi danni notlo pettukovataniki try chesanu
aina kani valla kaledu inthalo evarivo rendu chetulu na tala meda pettinattu
anipinchindi tirige lopu balanga pattukoni tosaru anthe aa debbaki kumar modda
sagam na notloki vellipoindi
Wrong Turn Part – 6
Naku
ventane kora poindi aina kani na tala ni vidavakunda strokes ippustune unnay aa
chetulu ala kasepatiki naku chikatam lo flow vachindi tarvata na talanu
vadileste nenu evara ani chuste KANAKAM na venaka nilabi navvutu osey Lavanya
ani nannu lady ga sambodistu nenu
rakamunde action loki digipoyave undu help chestanu ani cheppi alane undi kasta
pakkaki jarigi nenu em chestunnano chudu nv alane cheyyali andi.
Nenu
mokalla pine kurchoni pakkaki jarigithe kanakam mokalla meda kurchoni Kumar
bava idi kotta pitta kada inka nerchukoledu emi anukoku nenu chupistale ela
cheyalo ani cheppi modda ni chikatam modalu pettindi madayalo api artha mainda
ela cheyalo ante nenu tala oopanu sare ra cheddam iddaram ani cheppi kanakam
tip chikutu nannu vadi balls chikamandi
aa kasepatiki adi balls chikutu nannu tip chikamandi.
Memiddaram okesari blowjob ichesariki vadiki mood vachi mottam ma moham
pi karchesadu. Ventane kanakam na daggara ki vachi na face antha clean ga lick
chesi mottam vadi veeryanni notlo ki tesukoni naku lip kiss ichi na notlo sagam
posi minginchesindi.
Tarvata
lechi face tuduchukoni ika ni pani modalu pettu bava nenu veltanu ante ekkadiki
potave ani lagi kanakam sallu pattukoni vattithe abba vadulu bava chala panulu
unnay nikosam ilanti figure techanu danto enjoy chey mundu ante danni vadilesi
na vypuku tirigadu.
Nannu piki levamani cheppi inka aa jacket enduko vippey anagane mottam
tesisi nude ga nunchunnanu vadu mancham pi padukoni vachi na pi paduko ve
annadu nenu alane chesanu. Vadu na jadani munduku tesukoni na koppulo unna
malle la vasana chustu na neck pi muddulu pedutu chinnaga malli vadi danni mood
loki techi na pirra la ki rastunnadu. Next em jarabotundo arhtamai vadini
batimalanu kavalante inko blowjob istanu nanu vadiley ante ivvataniki inka time
undileve idduvu gani mundu asalu pani modalu pedatam ani cheppi vadi rendu
chetulatho na pirralu pisukutu chinnaga chilchi alane rough ga condom kuda
pettakunda okkasariga lopaki tosesadu aa debbaki naku narakam kanapadi gattiga
arustunte na jacket na notlo kukki migilina saganni kuda tosesadu nenu noppi
barinchaleka gila gila kottukuntunna vadi pi kurchoni ventane vadu oka chetto
na nadumu ni gattiga pattukoni kadalakunda inko chetto na breast ni pattukoni na
nipples ni notlo pettukoni chikatam modalu pettadu ala cheyatam valla okesari
sammaga inka noppiga rendu vidaluga anipinchindi naa ass hole nunchi bleeding
kuda ayindi aa debbaki vadu navvi naku ribbon cutting ila cheyatam ante entho
istam ani cheppi chinnaga vadi danni bayatki tiyagane pranam lechi vachi nattu
ayindi malli ventane lonaki tosesadu ala kasepatiki nenu rhytham lo ki velli
piki kindaku vadi pine kurchoni oogutunnanu.
Ala
kasepatiki pain poyi pleasure vachindi alane kumar debbaki lavan kumar poyi
lavanya vachi cherindi na vontolo ki. Ala entha sepu vesukunnado kuda
teliyaledu nenu alisipoyi alane vadi meda nidrapoyanu....
Ala na
life lo wrong turn open ayyindi..........................
hi lav nenu krishnapriya-kp ni stry awesome undhi dani continuation kuda try chayee plss...
ReplyDeleteok krishna priya i am in toor. i will post soon and thanks for comment
ReplyDeletelavu ee stry continue cheyave babu plss maa bujji akka kadhu plss
ReplyDeleteడియర్ లావీ,
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